Topic : during the corona virus crisis , many people did meaningful and courageous deeds. Write a paragraph of about 140 words about one of the deeds that impressed you most.
This is my paragraph :
Corona virus has become a widespread disease and put great pressure on the medical system of numerous countries . During this endless battle , I have encountered a great number of moral brave examples . Firstly , The wonderful contribution of doctors and nurses makes their health suffer impresses me so much . Indeed , Having worked continuously for a long time with such protective clothing dries their hands and burns the candle at both ends .Secondly , The great number of funds have been raised for necessity and vaccine thank for voluntary sponsors . For instance , COVID 19 vaccination fund gained considerable agreement and donation from almost citizens; Moreover , ''Rice atm '' in Ho Chi Minh City which grew excessively came in handy for supporting impoverished dwellers . Finally, Courageous teenagers volunteered to give a hand in checkpoint in providing self isolated patients with medical equipment . Take the adolescences in Ho Chi Minh City as an vivid example , many oxygen tanks have shipped in time for COVID infected people .In conclusion , Despite the detrimental result of COVID 19 pandemic daily life , we are still made closer by these admirable behaviour.
I highly appreciate your assistance .
Have a nice day
This is my paragraph :
Corona virus has become a widespread disease and put great pressure on the medical system of numerous countries . During this endless battle , I have encountered a great number of moral brave examples . Firstly , The wonderful contribution of doctors and nurses makes their health suffer impresses me so much . Indeed , Having worked continuously for a long time with such protective clothing dries their hands and burns the candle at both ends .Secondly , The great number of funds have been raised for necessity and vaccine thank for voluntary sponsors . For instance , COVID 19 vaccination fund gained considerable agreement and donation from almost citizens; Moreover , ''Rice atm '' in Ho Chi Minh City which grew excessively came in handy for supporting impoverished dwellers . Finally, Courageous teenagers volunteered to give a hand in checkpoint in providing self isolated patients with medical equipment . Take the adolescences in Ho Chi Minh City as an vivid example , many oxygen tanks have shipped in time for COVID infected people .In conclusion , Despite the detrimental result of COVID 19 pandemic daily life , we are still made closer by these admirable behaviour.
I highly appreciate your assistance .
Have a nice day